Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Journal 6.2

Q1. So, in the end, how’d your WP2 paper go?  What were you happy with?  What weren’t you?  Why?  Be specific! (Remember: this is fodder for your end-of-quarter metacognitive reflection)

I am actually pretty pleased with my WP-2. 
I thought I had good structure and flow, and that I was pretty clear in explaining the differences and similarities among the different articles. I also included more evidence from the readings than last time, and had a clearer thesis

Q2. Which 2 or 3 comments that you received yesterday were the most helpful for you?  Why?

Unfortunately, I was unable to attend class for the peer review sesh... However, the big changes I made to my rough draft were:
1) restructuring my paper so that it is organized by ideas, with my sources interweaved
2) clarification of thesis/argument
3) inclusion of more evidence from readings

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